i misspelled savvy as saavy (thank you red squiggle) and had to re-look it up to remember how to spell it. savvy is a fun word. sav-vy. business and tech-savvy in this instance of editing. anything to save a little bit more white space.
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my wrists, hands, fingers, and arm hurt. recently i suspect i've been suffering from some sort of carpal tunnel, but i think i might have pulled a muscle when attempting to do finger stretches. what's it called? oh, yes. an occupational health hazard.
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is the change that teaching or publishing research could possibly make, worth the pain and suffering of the phd?
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it's not tito's finest, but there may not be many other styles other than a bob one could do for the growing hair out stage.
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sometimes it's hard to edit things down not because you have an attachment to what you've written, but b/c you don't. the trick is finding and keeping the baby. (you know bath water, yadda yadda.) 10 whole pages of confusion to sort through, reduce, make more clear.... it makes sense in it's current state b/c it's got some sort of narrative flow to it. i guess that means i need to reorganize the story. fraking-krill.
